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Wednesday 22 February 2017

Nasibah race recount

W.A.L.T : write an Recount.

Did you know that our teacher Mr Goodwin is a very crazy teacher. Today he told us to line up we are going to do something lame and fast so we put on our shoes and lined up outside our classroom. Unintentionally he now tells us to line up along the goal post.
At this minute he says GO! and I stood there for 10 seconds and then I went running i thought in my head why do teachers to this. On my way back I had tripped over a piece of rock I said “ I have had better experience than this cleaning my house and doing chores was better. After all everybody was lying on the grass and breathing like a bunch of sumo wrestlers puffing.


When I had tripped over all my thoughts had fallen out of my head and I was not confident to do my recount any more I was exhausted.  I think that my teacher has come back from Thailand and gotten far to crazy.

I would never want to do this again i have had enough of running already. Mr Goodwin if you are reading this please calm down that would be so nice.

Task Description: today Our teacher told us to line up along the goal post and he told us the instructions that we had to run to the other goal post and back.

Thursday 16 February 2017

Bird identification

Walt: make connections across multiple texts
today my task was to identify these 4 different type of birds that i have written about and if you see carefully maybe you can find a link to a website.

Tuesday 14 February 2017

Newspaper tower



Have you ever constructed a Tower before? Well today I came to knowing that it will be a normal day. But when I come in class I saw my teacher sorting out newspapers,  That seemed a little weird. I was kind of convinced of what we were going to do.


When we were being told about the experience I was so excited. I had overfull of ideas in my mind I could not wait to explode those ideas out of my mind. My teacher ( Mr Goodwin ) was telling us instructions but I did not bother listening I was far too busy.


When we got to plan it I turned out that  none of my ideas exploded. When it was my turn Bethan would get frustrated and she would say nobody listens to  me and i would give my turn to her all the time.
But finally at last me and my group mix and matched all of our ideas and came with 1 plan.


As we were constructing the newspaper tower  we made a platform and then we tried to stick all the bits and pieces but it just wouldn't work. We tried different ways we scrunched up newspaper but it would just fall down and we couldn’t  stand it.

I would have to say that next time I would rather write about the weekends to be honest.

Thursday 9 February 2017

Chicken flavoured worms

Walt: write quality introductions.
Have you ever heard of delicious chicken worms?
Well my teacher just fed us chicken flavored worms, probably because he had 12 cups of coffee last night. I had fun looking at everyone.

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Introduction Rubric

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Hook
My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation
My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
My audience is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.
Task description: in today's lesson we experience all about chicken noodles. i was laughing because my teacher had put it on peoples faces.

Tuesday 7 February 2017

My native plant task

Walt: make connections across multiple texts.

Task description: today we were learning all about native to New Zealand so this was our task.

Friday 3 February 2017

My cameras group

Walt: follow instructions and present work to a high standard.
Task Description: my task for today was write about my group cameras. So basically what i have written is  what is it, my experience, care, and a picture of me holding a camera.